Jack's Big Detention Day

Chapter 1
Operation Escape!

Jack Flynt , the super millionaire/agent tied Up his shoelaces and then set off for school. He said hello to his friends Oli Jones,Josh Beaker And the best of all, the one and only Nadir Mcclaren. He then held out his meaty hand for his pals to shake it.
"Hey,you OK? I heard about this operation Jack Jackal jail meeting. Gonna check it out?"
Jacks blue eyes bulged out as he listened to Josh Beaker. "Not now, not today, Bums, damn and bother!"
Jack zoomed to the 'Teachers only enter at risk' door and placed his giant Ear a on it.
"… and capture Jack," said a raspy voice like Mrs Fury, the school headmistress. "Just guard all of the doors and leave the library to the cameras."


Chapter 2
The Big Problem

You see, Jack loves going to detention because he can torture teachers with his rotten jokes and sneaky objects until they give him £10 and let him free. However, if Jack didn't get home before 4 o'clock he would be busted by his mum. Jack and his family had an important meeting With the president and 3 different mayors! His mum would have a panic attack if Jack couldn't escape from his detention!
Jack decided to make an early attempt to escaping. He sprinted to the office door but he bumped into Caretaker Reaper. Honestly, why are all these names from Greek mythology?
"I'll leave you to Mr Circe." Said , or more likely barked Reapy face.
Then the horrible Mr Circe picked up Jack with one hand and carried Jack to his classroom.
Everyone was making something. Nadir Mclaren was making a motion sensor football and doing keepie uppies.


Chapter 3
The Plan

Jack got his broken jetpack out of his bag and repaired it.
He then flew to the land of school roofs.
He then slid down the chimney and jogged to the mess room.
'I wonder if I could fool the teachers' Jack thought.
He carefully cut out two black paper squares about the size of the cameras in the library and grabbed a tube of those 'stick to any surface' glue.
"Ha ha! Operation escape plan now ON!!!" said Jack with glee.


Chapter 4
Escape Forever After

Still covered in soot from the chimeny, Jack tiptoed to the library and smeared the glue on all the camera lens. He then pressed the black squares on the cameras full of glue and rushed back to his class.
None of the teachers suspected Jack.
Jack grabbed his P.E kit from his class, got changed in the changing room and put his old clothes in the library. Each time he crossed a teacher he would tell them he was carrying out a request from Ms Dodds.
Jack then filled his clothes with mini beanbags to make it look like he was sleeping.Jack then unpeeled the squares from the camera lens.
Thinking Jack was actually asleep, Ms.C (the office woman) rushed to the library, leaving the coasts clear for Jack.


Chapter 5
No Place Like Home

Jack rushed to the office and grabbed the gate keys.
He then took a limousine back home.




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